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How would the music continue throughout the text, I wonder? [[Special:Contributions/172.71.254.47|172.71.254.47]] 04:43, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
 
How would the music continue throughout the text, I wonder? [[Special:Contributions/172.71.254.47|172.71.254.47]] 04:43, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
:It'd sound like an operetic overture, I suppose, apparently introducing snatches of the main themes that would 'later' appear in full. The envelope them would be seemlessly arranged with (for example, though I don't see how this would work with his "practically the first thing you read" textual appearance) a few chords of the Imperial March whenever Vader is the subject of the text, then if it recited a riposte by Luke then ''his'' sound-theme would intervene.
 
:One wonders if the other way of imagining this scroll-only film would be to get the soundtrack (music, only) of the 'real thing' (presupposing that there is one, scored and performed by John Williams et al, and the con-trick is being even more cruel to have ''had'' an actual film and yet still not show it, but this crawl-in-leiu) and write/edit the text you use as the crawl to ''key in with the existing sound cues''... In fact, that sounds like a very doable thing that might not even be instantly detected by fans if presented correctly:
 
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  During the battle, Rebel spies managed to steal secret plans to the Empire's ultimate weapon, the DEATH STAR, and space station with enough power to destroy an entire planet.
 
  Pursued by the Empire's sinister agents, Princess Leia races home aboard her starship, custodian of the stolen plans that can save her people and restore freedom to the galaxy.
 
  The Corellian corvette made its way onward through the expanse of space, seemingly piercing the starscape in serene majesty, belying the power that its cluster of engines provided desperately for the purposes of its flight.
 
  For almost immediately behind it cames the vast and tapering bulk of the Star Destroyer, the spearhead of the Imperial forces, sending forth a barage of plasma fire as its city-worth of arms and armour was finally brought, by its own vast and powerful engines, to bear down upon its much smaller target.
 
  Within the corvette, the rush of armed personnel, to muster into assigned defensive locations spotted around the internal corridors of the hull, was punctuated by the sight of Princess Leia Organa, preparing herself and her droid attendants in relative calm, an eye within the storm.
 
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:...well, that's the transitional bit of text off the top of my head (my own composition following on from the true ending of that particular scrawl example). Could do with checking/re-editing for lengths/upping or downing or otherwise fedoing the floridity of the prose style, to taste, if it were to become the real (fake) thing... [[Special:Contributions/172.71.178.207|172.71.178.207]] 10:18, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
 

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