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:''Our Story'' | :''Our Story'' | ||
:Growing up on my grandma's farm, I spent so many cozy mornings in the kitchen, watching her take trays of fresh-baked cookies from the oven. | :Growing up on my grandma's farm, I spent so many cozy mornings in the kitchen, watching her take trays of fresh-baked cookies from the oven. | ||
β | :Her cookies were just ''awful''. | + | :Her cookies were just '''''awful'''''. |
:She used the finest ingredients. Eggs straight from the coop, stone-ground flour, hand-churned butter. But she squandered them. It's so sad. She told me I was too picky, but I know what cookies are supposed to taste like. | :She used the finest ingredients. Eggs straight from the coop, stone-ground flour, hand-churned butter. But she squandered them. It's so sad. She told me I was too picky, but I know what cookies are supposed to taste like. | ||
β | :When I started a bakery, I vowed not to repeat her mistakes. These cookies won't fall apart in your hands. They have gooey centers, and slightly crisp exteriors, not the other way around, ''Grandma''. There's no mysterious gritty texture. Why would there be? | + | :When I started a bakery, I vowed not to repeat her mistakes. These cookies won't fall apart in your hands. They have gooey centers, and slightly crisp exteriors, not the other way around, '''''Grandma'''''. There's no mysterious gritty texture. Why would there be? |
:If you enjoy these cookies, please write to my grandma to let her know. | :If you enjoy these cookies, please write to my grandma to let her know. | ||
:Thanks! | :Thanks! |