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This needs some major cleaning up. [[User:Lackadaisical|Lackadaisical]] ([[User talk:Lackadaisical|talk]]) 06:22, 9 May 2016 (UTC) | This needs some major cleaning up. [[User:Lackadaisical|Lackadaisical]] ([[User talk:Lackadaisical|talk]]) 06:22, 9 May 2016 (UTC) | ||
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Like I said in my previous comment, this needed some major editing. The explanation was disorganized, obtrusive and did little to assist in any understanding of the comic. I condensed important, relevant information and removed unimportant speculations and fixed the general tone of the article. Every word of the comic does not need to be hashed and rehashed only information which is conducive to understanding the comic and the topic of the comic should be included. It is not necessary to include an entire summarized blurb from wikipedia to describe that stars appear small in the night sky or the entire history of the andromeda galaxy. If a visitor does not know that stars look small they are probably not old enough to be reading and if they are interested in andromeda they will follow the wiki link and read about it on their own time. Speculation should be reserved to the talk page and other sections, it should not be included in the comic explanation.[[User:Lackadaisical|Lackadaisical]] ([[User talk:Lackadaisical|talk]]) 16:42, 9 May 2016 (UTC) | Like I said in my previous comment, this needed some major editing. The explanation was disorganized, obtrusive and did little to assist in any understanding of the comic. I condensed important, relevant information and removed unimportant speculations and fixed the general tone of the article. Every word of the comic does not need to be hashed and rehashed only information which is conducive to understanding the comic and the topic of the comic should be included. It is not necessary to include an entire summarized blurb from wikipedia to describe that stars appear small in the night sky or the entire history of the andromeda galaxy. If a visitor does not know that stars look small they are probably not old enough to be reading and if they are interested in andromeda they will follow the wiki link and read about it on their own time. Speculation should be reserved to the talk page and other sections, it should not be included in the comic explanation.[[User:Lackadaisical|Lackadaisical]] ([[User talk:Lackadaisical|talk]]) 16:42, 9 May 2016 (UTC) |